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Real quiet aside from Ricky, that is!The reader should feel the sense of peace out here. Ricky's a big obnoxious guy but he can muster up a pretty good date, it turns out.I think I might need to add a panel or so to draw out the pacing and give a sense of time passing while they drink. The empty beer cans might not do it!I'm also not sure if Laurie just saying what's on his mind is in character. The reader should definitely pick up on the fact that Laurie is getting something from Ricky that he isn't in his current relationship!
Real quiet aside from Ricky, that is!The reader should feel the sense of peace out here. Ricky's a big obnoxious guy but he can muster up a pretty good date, it turns out.I think I might need to add a panel or so to draw out the pacing and give a sense of time passing while they drink. The empty beer cans might not do it!I'm also not sure if Laurie just saying what's on his mind is in character. The reader should definitely pick up on the fact that Laurie is getting something from Ricky that he isn't in his current relationship!
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