purplebirdman - The Dropouts | Page 61 | Draft + page 60 timelapse
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Another brand new day for brand new mistakes!Finally the main cast is complete. A quick page to reset everything and let the reader reflect on everything that's transpired to get us here.I'm not sure if I should add some more detail of the places. This is a pretty character focused story but maybe some key features in this page like Laurie living next to a distinctive building that we can also see from Tony's window or including Miz Mabel would help make the world seem bigger.Gotta think on it!
Another brand new day for brand new mistakes!Finally the main cast is complete. A quick page to reset everything and let the reader reflect on everything that's transpired to get us here.I'm not sure if I should add some more detail of the places. This is a pretty character focused story but maybe some key features in this page like Laurie living next to a distinctive building that we can also see from Tony's window or including Miz Mabel would help make the world seem bigger.Gotta think on it!
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