purplebirdman - The Dropouts | Page 62 | Draft + page 61 timelapse
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Nothin like starting the weekend with your dad telling you to get a jobThis page is the from the first iteration of the story, and I'm gunna tweak some details about this conversation so it fits the ongoing story better! The keystone is to re-enforce something that was mentioned by Tony on page 46 and alluded to by Freddy on page 42: Freddy has been worrying or perhaps prompting Tony in a particular direction. Since we're seeing most of this from Ricky's perspective as he comes into the situation, the reader has not seen any of the conversations Freddy and Tony have been having between each other that have caused so much tension... yet!
Nothin like starting the weekend with your dad telling you to get a jobThis page is the from the first iteration of the story, and I'm gunna tweak some details about this conversation so it fits the ongoing story better! The keystone is to re-enforce something that was mentioned by Tony on page 46 and alluded to by Freddy on page 42: Freddy has been worrying or perhaps prompting Tony in a particular direction. Since we're seeing most of this from Ricky's perspective as he comes into the situation, the reader has not seen any of the conversations Freddy and Tony have been having between each other that have caused so much tension... yet!
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